Informative, but lacking in presentation
And if you want ancient wisdom, try Lao-Tse or Siddhartha Gautama. They had a pretty good idea of what they were talking about.
Informative, but lacking in presentation
And if you want ancient wisdom, try Lao-Tse or Siddhartha Gautama. They had a pretty good idea of what they were talking about.
Voice acting needs improvement
I don't just mean mic quality, I mean that the voice acting itself was lacking. The lines lacked emotion, or enough power behind them to be taken seriously. The animation and story wasn't bad, though- you just need to improve the delivery of the lines.
Could be a great start
This actually isn't that bad. You had better keep working on this, though, cause I want to see a completed version of this in the portal at some point. Even if you don't add color, you could get this to be really good if you just finished it and added at least music.
Thanks!
Holy $#1]...
Looks good, smooth animation and artwork.
Pretty damn creepy.
Too bad he couldn't retain the little protein he managed to get...
Nice work on the anatomical stuff, by the way.
Thanks!
oh, so... something
OK, that was one of the most ridiculous things I have heard in a while. That song, in that voice? Priceless! :D
This nicely sums up the issue
This is pretty much what happened... Maybe even in terms of maturity toward the issue.
Like their mannerisms
Guy with pants is just lackadaisical, almost prancing along, while the guy behind is desperately trying to catch up a really awkward run.
Like their expressions.
I lol'ed.
Heh, like the final line. But my favorite part was you didn't use some crocodile Dundee reference, but went the full monty and made the old man a ninja badass.
If you have any senior relatives, you should get them a sword cane for self protection.
I have widely varying tendencies.
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