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Nice story, bad narration

The art and the story being told were interesting and pretty good, but the narration is on the poor side. A majority of the issue was the whisper. It would have been great if you had told it in a voice befitting a lost child, instead of kids trying to tell ghost stories without being caught up late.

I like where this is going :)

Keep it up, this looks great already, and is rather well done. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Good, with something special

The flash and writing was pretty good. The jokes kept the idea straight, and they did a good job of pointing out quirks that don't hit you while you're playing. The action scene against dark link was really good- maybe when you finish up this series, you could do a couple of fight scenes. It was well choreographed, and looked good, so please keep the idea in mind.

Nice sequence, lack of polish

The action sequence itself, while it has a few cliches, is actually pretty good. See if you can smooth it out, add sound and music, and slow it down so the action can be appreciated.

So wrong... but better for it...

I'll admit, i was rather disturbed. But it was very well done, and still funny. Nice job.

Toon was awesome

The length is fine. Was really cool and quite enjoyable. When you leave it open to additional entries so well, I still have hope that you might make more with the trio, even if it is after you work on some other projects you want to do. These are just some awesome characters, and you have a fantastic style that puts a good dose of humor into it without detracting from the awesomeness.

Please, don't make this you final one- go on an indefinite hiatus, but just don't make this the final one, please.

You could have at least done a good recording

Okay, the flash is iffy, but I've seen worse. However, the true power of Shakespeare is supposed to be in the text, and the voice acting for this lacked any sort of presence or power that would have redeemed the animation. I wouldn't have minded the iffy flash if there had been a decent recording to it, but this lacked the emotion or acting that would have made it interesting, even if the animation had been fantastic.

Nice choice in background music though.

Don't let the legion die...

I don't animate myself, so I don't think I can join, but the I have always liked the LL for submitting good flashes collectively, instead of posting primarily annoying spam. While I may only be an observer, I say that the Lock Legion must not be allowed to pass out of existence.

Long live the Legion!

LeafLock responds:

hey, we'd be willing to take you. though not very common, we DO get a few members who join for the community.

Looking forward to it

I have liked your other tankmen submissions, and even have "Tankbusters" in my favorites. I've liked your sense of humor in the submissions, but you've managed to make them awesome still. While this new one seems to take a different direction and be more serious, that's not necessarily a bad thing, as you have some characters with "Action" potential, ya know? Anyway, I hope that while you keep some of the humor, you manage to give all the main characters their own "awesome" moments, even Goggles.

Looking forward to when this comes out :)

Good song, bad flash

The song is definitely good enough to get a high score on it's own, and that is what the Audio Portal is for. The flash is just a loop of the same motions over and over, so don't expect it to do well. If you want to get some better feedback, submit the song to the audio portal, and it might even do well enough to make a top entry of the week.

I really like the song, it's just that the flash is too plain to keep around.

auriplane responds:

Thanks!! You can tell I'm new to Flash. But I hoped a simple aesthetic worked. I guess it didn't!! I submitted it to the Audio Portal just now, so hopefully it'll get approved.

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