what might have helped
You could have made this more entertaining if you had made some good transitions to go between the songs. It would have had a much nicer flow.
what might have helped
You could have made this more entertaining if you had made some good transitions to go between the songs. It would have had a much nicer flow.
Nice tune
Nice sound and song, just could use a little more variety.
Nice work
this is a very good song. nice melody, nice effects, like the metal voice. Overall pretty good. However, the timing on some of the lyrics seemed sort of off, throwing the rhythm or something. It wasn't bad to the point that i could really call this a good song though, so good work.
Your voice is actually pretty good
While it sounds like you don't know any technical elements that are integral to this type of singing, it is still very good. Your voice itself is actually rather pleasant. The Main song is pretty good as well. Keep up the good work, and don't degrade yourself so much!
Thanks so much man... you have no clue how much that means,
I'm pretty sure it not house
Loops pretty well. has that bright, upbeat feeling to it. Gets really annoying after a short time though. Sounds good though. Use this as a base for something.
Thanks for the first part.
It gets annoying though... I wouldn't say after a short time...
But thanks. :D
Nice Groove.
Love this track. It's nice and relaxed, while it still has a steady rhythm. Keep up the good work.
Very nice.
To begin- I usually hate rap. granted, this is more hip-hop than rap, but they are almost the same thing. However, i really enjoyed this. nice voice, to whoever rapped. lyrics are actually quite powerful. I like it. try to at least maintain this standard- I would like it if there was at least some rap i could enjoy. It would mean that there is hope for the genre.
My goal is to keep improving, so check back often! Thanks for the review!
Good.
Nice melody, but the main instrument is a little strange. Also, slightly repetitive. Actually a very nice song, though. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the review!
The repetition thing is something I'm trying to improve but that I'm having a bit of trouble with. I'll do my best to improve that for my next songs.
Sa-WEET!!!
very nice song. interesting vibe, and the sound effects add a nice touch. You may want to change the title, though- there are many things with that idea- maybe you should call it something based in the idea of an air raid.
Lol okay. I will take your advice and do just that. Thank you! ;D
so relaxing...
A nice song here. It gets across that relaxed, calm feeling that can be so pleasant when you need it.
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