good melodically...
but dude, get some better sounds. FL studio should allow you to just change the instrument that plays a part.
good melodically...
but dude, get some better sounds. FL studio should allow you to just change the instrument that plays a part.
See below. :P
Very driving
strong beat and sound. It sounds like a good theme for some kind of industrial scene or something.
Yea, I try to make my tracks really bass-heavy (being a newer techno fan), but with this, I was just experimenting with some mixer effects and trying my hand at a darker, more industrial song. Ultimately, I think it turned out well. Thanks again for reviewing my humble attempt at industrial!
This sounds great!
This sounds awesome. who is playing this for you? But there is one problem. the file is a bit too quiet. be sure to check your mike levels when you record.
My band and I did this in our Christmas concert of 2008. We don't have very good mics, so it's just quiet because of that. Thanks for review!
not bad
i like this. but i noticed some kind of little hiccup or something around 2:01 that sort of spoiled this very atmospheric piece. try and take a look at that, could you?
Omg you're right. . .
As soon as I read this I listened carefully through and caught exactly what you're talking about. I can't believe I've never heard some of the mistakes people point out, but someday I swear!! When I get a proper music program. . I will remake these songs again so they won't have the errors of playing by ear or losing rhythm. Although I do still highly enjoy sitting at a piano/keyboard and recording for fun.
Thank you so much for the review and the catch!
dude
dude, that's pretty good. nice writing and voices. but it is all spoiled by the sound. Is it your microphone, or is something wrong with your program?
Maybe it's the mic. I've been using one that came with Hey You Pikachu and some of the wiring is exposed. But it's way better than the one that came with laptop, and those are the only options I have right now.
you should redo this
The accordian sounds pretty good actually. Can't hear the lyrics though. Nice melody from what I can hear though.
Thanks :P
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