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WAHOO!

I have always enjoyed your Brakenwood shorts, thinking that they were more fairy tale material with a fantastic Celtic style and entertaining storyline. But this... this has just blown my mind. And a feature- length in the works, too? Holy snap. You most definitely deserve it.

Is the shadow beast in the beginning related to the YuYu in some way?

Be sure to let Ms. Reynolds know that she has a lovely voice :)

chluaid responds:

I'll pass that on to Emma :)

GAAAHHH! RICK ROLLED!!!

Oh well, what the hell. Anyway, at least it isn't just a crappy portal spam. Looks good enough though, that I look forward to seeing your first serious submission to Newgrounds. Looking forward to it, and obey the song's chorus while you're on Newgrounds, or I will cry T_T

Looks good, but I don't get it.

Nice style, sound effects could use more work, but if you could make this a little easier to understand or add some background information to your description it would probably do better. But don't just blurt out the meaning of things if you can help it- say the things that can then be used to conjecture what this is trying to say... or not say.

Nice base.

Like the music. The animation was pretty good and the style looked pretty good too. You don't even need any kind of more elaborate story- you just need backgrounds to this. nice start, dude.

Fishing stories always seem to have happy endings.

Even if the fish gets away, just the fact it was hooked makes for a thrilling tale. Nice jokes. Especially the one with the failed self-censor. nice gag.

Haven't heard this in a while.

Points for using a song that escapes a lot of attention. However, this flash needs work; the lines look beaded and fuzzy or something. And I think that the audio could have come out better- unless it changed when you uploaded it or something. Nice storyboard type idea, but if you could smooth the animation it would be greatly improved.

Bug

The screen turns red, completely red, and i can't see the end. what i did see looked pretty good though.

kreten responds:

yes i've had this happen to me too when viewing it but at other points it does play all the way through. i have no idea why it does that.

NEEDS SOUND!!!

The animation itself is okay, but it desperately needs sound to flesh it out.

decent.

Not bad. nice quirks, and a pretty good story. If you do an animation and want some voice work, I'd be willing to help. (sorry about the plug, but I reallllly want to do something for somebody. I have a few submissions you can check.)

SalterAnimation responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah i'll let you know about the voice acting. I'm working on something now which your voice would be good for.

Cheers again.

One of the greatest things i've seen in a while

This was absolutely crazy! I absolutely loved it.

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