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Informative, but lacking in presentation

And if you want ancient wisdom, try Lao-Tse or Siddhartha Gautama. They had a pretty good idea of what they were talking about.

Voice acting needs improvement

I don't just mean mic quality, I mean that the voice acting itself was lacking. The lines lacked emotion, or enough power behind them to be taken seriously. The animation and story wasn't bad, though- you just need to improve the delivery of the lines.

Could be a great start

This actually isn't that bad. You had better keep working on this, though, cause I want to see a completed version of this in the portal at some point. Even if you don't add color, you could get this to be really good if you just finished it and added at least music.

GreatPowerfulTrixie responds:

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A little more yaoi then I expected...

It's pretty good, and gave me a few chuckles, though it was a little gayer (I mean that in the most literal sense) than I was expecting. Nice character art, smooth animation, and a pretty good song. Nice work.

Holy $#1]...

Looks good, smooth animation and artwork.

Pretty damn creepy.

Too bad he couldn't retain the little protein he managed to get...

Nice work on the anatomical stuff, by the way.

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

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oh, so... something

OK, that was one of the most ridiculous things I have heard in a while. That song, in that voice? Priceless! :D

This nicely sums up the issue

This is pretty much what happened... Maybe even in terms of maturity toward the issue.

Like their mannerisms

Guy with pants is just lackadaisical, almost prancing along, while the guy behind is desperately trying to catch up a really awkward run.

Like their expressions.

Nice work.

Not sure about the choice in music, but this is a decent new animation. Good enough to get good scores and acclaim. But seriously, maybe some change in music for different scenes might have been nice, as it was a nice song you had in the first place, just not sure if it had the right feel for the whole piece.

I lol'ed.

Heh, like the final line. But my favorite part was you didn't use some crocodile Dundee reference, but went the full monty and made the old man a ninja badass.

If you have any senior relatives, you should get them a sword cane for self protection.

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