Recording method actually makes it more interestin
I like this a lot. You are very good, able to play very on the piano. But the slight echo and sound change caused by your recording method actually adds to this piece, making it very stylish and ambient, which makes your title especially appropriate. Keep up the good work, and don't get too comfortable with this way of recording- you will want to put out better recordings for different pieces.
thanks for listening and for the advice!
Vocals are iffy
The song itself wasn't too bad, but the vocals are kinda bad. However, that may be just because they were recorded with a rock style in mind, and it didn't transfer well to the more poppy and bright melody of this techno.
The key points where the vocals feel short here were lack of tone and feeling.
Liked the melody and beat, but some of the sound choices made it kinda difficult for me to enjoy this.
Vocals could use work, but you have the potential to make it better yourself. You could start by using your diaphragm more to support your sound. Some of your higher holds actually sounded like you were doing this, and were pretty good. But you may also want to rearrange the vocal melody, as some parts didn't sound right in the song, whether it was a rhythm here or a pitch choice there. Give the vocals another run-over, work out a few kinks, and it will be pretty good. And give singing it another shot, just remembering to put more of your diaphragm behind the sound instead of using your throat.
Thanks! Some of the melodies were rather hard to work out due to crazy time signatures, namely near the first fourth of the song. I'll have to focus more on diaphragm usage. I put so much work in polishing the rest of the song with the mix and guitars etc. that I simply haven't put enough effort in the vocal.
I hope you liked the rest of the song, didn't really get input on that. Thanks for the review!
Feels like a mission select menu.
Pretty good. Relaxed, but has an intensity to it that gives it that sense of urgency prevalent in a tactical briefing. Nice bass sound, by the way. cool tune.
Lol ok .Wrong title lol^^.That's why we lost ^^
This is really very nice.
This sounds pretty cool, and has a good feel to it. Decent choice in sounds, but one of the more interesting aspects is how it shifts across styles as the song progresses. You managed to segue them into each other quite well.
You have put some good stuff on the site lately. Keep up the good work.
Heavy, powerful, and you used some good sounds, too.
Very nice piece. A very good recording, coupled with very nice accompaniment. The flute sounded great, dude. The background sounds were good, and just enough to give it a majestic atmosphere. Very nice job, you made a great balance.
Wrong instrument for the song.
Maybe you could have done a jazz version or something with a trumpet, but a combination of loud recording and iffy instrument choice keep this from getting a high score.
Fix your harmonies
The song's not bad, but you need to fix the harmonies in the chorus, or get everyone to hit their notes a little more precisely, whichever is the issue.
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